2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. In my opinion the green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. And it is important that the school should improve the students thought level. At present, it is high time that the school should fit. And it is happy that the society wants to see that. Because it is well known that the university has many great diathesis students.