作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. In my opinion the green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. And it is important that the school should improve the students thought level. At present, it is high time that the school should fit. And it is happy that the society wants to see that. And it is well known that the university has many great diathesis students.