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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com Date:4th,Sep,2013 To:KAOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:to establish business relationship Dear maddam or sir When I was in the NewYork Exhibition from 15th,Dec to 22th Dec,I learned something about your product ,NO5670.I was very interested in it and would be very grateful,if you send me the price list and instructions.Thank you very much for your help,and I hope we take this opportunity to establish long-term business relationship. Yours sincerely Hu Bin
