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Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. In my opinion the green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. And it is important that the school should improve the students thought level. At present, it is high time that the school should fit. And it is happy that the society wants to see that. And it is well known that the university has many great diathesis students. To improve the green campus level is important, and I have the following advice. First, we can hold some readind weeks or provide some race about the math. Second, hold some video or flim to show the activety. Third, be simple to see the grade of test. That is all, thanks.