拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. In my opinion the green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. And it is important that the school should improve the students thought level. At present, it is high time that the school should fit. And it is happy that the society wants to see that. And it is well known that the university has many great diathesis students. To improve the green campus level is important, and I have the following advice. First, we can hold reading weeks or provide some races about the math. Second, hold some video or film rate to show the activity. Third, be simple to see the number of test. That is all, thanks.