2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

可适当增加几条从句；文中高级词汇使用熟练，在单词拼写方面要继续努力；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Dear sir or madam, Bothered by overcrowed throngs and desired to have a good time during holiday ,I write the letter to make some suggestions for changing such circumstances. to start with ,the authorities concerned ought to take some drastic measureas to improve the current sisuation.For instance ,they may make different schedules in different spots in a bid to divide flow.In addition ,it's better to restrict the number of tickets to control people appreciating the scenery .Best but not to least ,construct infranstures to accept people in expanding number ,as well as improve environment of langscape. I will be greatfui if the sistuation could be developed. Looking forward to your reply.