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Over the past week pressure has been mounting on South Korean President Park Geun-hye, who has been suspected of letting her longtime friend to intervene in state affairs. Park's approval rating has fallen to 17 percent, the lowest since her inauguration in 2013, from 25 percent a week ago, according to a pollster survey by Gallup Korea. The scandal involves Park's longtime confidante Choi Soon-sil, who is without any official title in public office. Hankyoreh newspaper reported that Choi meddled in government affairs, including Seoul's decision to shut down the Kaesong industrial complex in the Democratic People's Republic of Korea. Supporters of Park were outraged even though the country's first female president made a public apology last Tuesday to admit Choi's involvement in the editing of her speeches only during an initial period of her presidency. According to the Gallup Korea survey, 80 percent of respondents believed the scandal was true while only 6 percent had doubts.