小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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I have a new teacher.He is very good on study.He have a short hair,and he always wear loose pants and t-short.He likes rose.Under his teaching , my english have a big progress.I like study with him.now,it is his birthday tomrrow . Many of students will give him a big prsent. I hope he can like it .