广东江门市福泉奥林匹克学校2013届九年级月考试卷英语作文

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

I went to Zhuhai with my family last year. We enjoyed ourselves there. It is a very beautiful seaside city in the south of Guangdong. There are lots of places of interest. We went to Zhuhai Fishgirl. The scenery there is very beautiful. As a seaside city,Zhuhai is also well-known for its seafood. You can taste different kinds of seafood without spending too much money. I won’t forget the days we spent in Zhuhai. If I have another chance,I will go there again.