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北京通州区2013届九年级上学期期末试卷英语作文:别人帮助你

发布时间:2013-05-15 18:10浏览次数:1365
要求:
根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。
生活中总有一些人在我们困难的时候帮助我们,他(她)可能是你的同学、你的老师、你的父母,也可能是一位陌生人……现在,某英文杂志就帮助(Help)话题征文,请你投稿。描述一次别人帮助你的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
评语:

高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;从句使用不熟练;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

用户练习作文:

We all need other's help, especially when we are in difficulties. I remember when I started to learn English in primary school, I was poor in it.I even couldn't pronounce the words correctly. My English teacher Miss Sun noticed it and came to help me. She gave me some English tapes and asked me to practice speaking in class.She also talked with me in English. It worked! My English was improved little by little. Now English is my favorite subject. Six years have passed and I never forget Miss Sun's help. I find one's help to others is very important. It may change others' life. So when there is someone that needs my help, I would give them a hand.

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