高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;从句使用不熟练;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
We all need other's help, especially when we are in difficulties. I remember when I started to learn English in primary school, I was poor in it.I even couldn't pronounce the words correctly. My English teacher Miss Sun noticed it and came to help me. She gave me some English tapes and asked me to practice speaking in class.She also talked with me in English. It worked! My English was improved little by little. Now English is my favorite subject. Six years have passed and I never forget Miss Sun's help. I find one's help to others is very important. It may change others' life. So when there is someone that needs my help, I would give them a hand.