2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

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First，I will go to Beijing for a visit. There is one of my dearmed places.I will go to Hang Zhou,Fu Zhou,Tai Wang,Guang Zhou and some places,too. Second,I will go to American for visit。There is my dearmed country.I will visit Waite House and visit you. Finally，I will come to my hometown to look after my parents.I will take some photos there. These things are my dearmed，so they are my favourite three things.