2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

Everyone knows the computer have became our basic toor for communication and searching in our daily life, so,let's talk about the relationship between the computer and man . At first ,the computer can help us to find out all kinds of information that we need ,such as ,how to cooking ,dressing ,studying ,even what should we do in the love . Second ,we can also use the computer to communicate with our classmates ,friends,and our families through the web site or application tools ,for example ,renren ,sina ,QQ and so on . we can make the most of computer to let ourselves have a better life ,we can not only study language ,singing and dancing ,to enrich our amateur life.but also can study the great lifestyle of the others ,then to make ourselves more excellent and perfect ,everyone is our teacher when they do something well.In addition to ,some chat tool and website can keep us in touch with this word ,and help us keeping communication with our friends ,let us live a better life . On the other hand ,the man created the computer to use ,also continue to optimize and improve it constantly,then achieved today's achievement ,without the man ,there will be no computer . In a word ,the computer and man need to develop with each other ,we can make the computer better and more convenient, meanwhile ,it can bring more interesting and useful information to our life .