2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Recetly,Xing Guang High School has held on cilmbed mountain in Daqing Mountain on 4.10.The school leader were think highly on this activity,they thought it can promote friendship with the student. Students and teachers were very excited on this day.they helped each other when someone have some problem.So they arrived the top quickly.And then they wanted to play games that it was hide-and-seek.,it was so funny.When nearly in the evening,they found food togeter and ate.It was so tired when they went to home but they were so happy. Through this activity l realize that friendship is very important.It can make us happy and promote our team spirit.