2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；文章用词太过单一，要仔细检查单词拼写。

The mobile phone is used to contract with the distance familly and friends in the past. As the mobile phone data, it is used in other zones. The contract with our family can happen in the TV that rich our life. But, what is the matter if we are overusing it? We can see in the picture, the people eyes with the mobile phone and take the blind crutch to look the road. That is so ridicilous! Totally, if the world is that, we will miss the adventure, it means lost love, hate, like and dislike.