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On Excessive Packaging Most of us can buy something what we need or we do not need at free time, and we can notice a familiar thing has different packagings, we choose the goods may by the differern packaging. It is a common situation that goods are packaged all over the world not only our country. With the development of society, people's style about everything has improved. Majority of sellers can package their good by excessive somethings, for instance colour, the material quality and so on in order to catch comsumers' eye, and there is no doult that many comsumers buy somethings because of the excessive packaging. Excessive packaging is bad for our society, but in my opinion it can affect our country is developing and people's life quality is growing in some respects . Packaged goods are perefect, but excessive packaging can down the perefect. Not only can waste materials but also having a bad effect on goods.
