字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;全文结构较为严谨。
Dear Friend, Haven't saw you a long time, I miss you so much. I'm so happy that you asked me for some suggestions about films, and I really want to recommend a great film—— the Pursuit of Happiness to you, which is my favorite film. Why is the film so impressive in my mind? There are so many reasons deserving mention, but only two factors are really special for us compared to a number of films. The most significant thing is that the story springs from a truth: a salesman, striving a better life for his 5-year-old son and himself, has run after the happiness. At the first time, I heard he finally hired by the company, my tears slip out immediately. How touching and enlightening the movie is! I 'm sure if you see the film, you can't put it aside! That's all. I am looking forward to discussing it with you later.