衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中用词稍显贫乏,请多使用高级词汇。
Xiao Ming is my best friend in our class. We often study and play together.He is not only a friend of my , but also a teather to me.Both in life and study.When I have some problem in my life, he can also work it out for me.English is hard for me, he know that, so he often help me enhance the ability of writing.