拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Xiao Ming is my best friend in our class. We often learn and play games together.He is not only a friend of my, but also a teacher to me.Both in life and study.When I have some problems in my life, he can also work it out for me.he know that English is hard for me,so he often help me enhance the ability of writing.