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作者词汇基础扎实；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。
Recently, the phenomenon of the goods with excessive packaging is becoming more and more common. And it causes the goods' commodity price is higher than the original material. What contributes to that problem, in my view, here are two factors. First, the excessive packaging goods' surface is more attractive than which is in normal packaging, so people are more likely to have the former. Second, people in the modern times are more concerned about their outer part, so when they go to visit someone, they are willing to choose the goods which with nice packaging, and it also shows the individuals they visit are important to them. As far as I'm concerned, it doesn't make any sense, it can only increase the burden on the environment. So I want to appeal you to pay more attention to the quality of the goods rather the appearance.
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