采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力。
For the turning point of life, I believe----based on we have different experiences include job, study and others and so on, no matter which kind of experience for our life is more than important-----that there is the more or less differences everyone,it may change our life trajectory. I replied, "I feel how difficult life is.I recalled three years ago when graduated from university with ambitious and ideal, and perhaps some immature and arrogant always have a feeling that I was a talent why not be reused. In three years, I slowly learned to be a person who has accumulated experience and work experience, but the more slowly in the work of this profession in-depth understanding, the more feel that they had learned the knowledge is quite superficial that may also be attributed to acquire the knowledge not enough depth, the book of professional knowledge and work practices are a lot of inconsistency even far away, then there is an idea that is to continue my studies - take part in the exams for postgraduates schools, this has with you today sitting together in the restaurant to eat ,in the take part in the exams for postgraduates schools , I have exhausted the power of primitive to have today's results, I think my efforts have not been in vain.Now think about this road may change my life trajectory.” They praised me, "Keep a low profile," I jokingly said. We left the hotel in a cheerful atmosphere back to the dormitory. No matter what the future will, let time to prove it.
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