学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
The impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication Nowadays,we live in the world with a tremendous Internet systems due to a boom the science and technology.Internet has effects on every aspect of our lives,especially on interpersonal communication. People hold two different views on the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication.Some think it is benefit to build up a positive personal relationships because it broaden our ways in which we communicate with others,like Facebook,making a number of friends at home and abroad without going out.However,others have the opinion that people are addicted to the Internet and always stay at home all day in their free time, having few chances to get along with others.As a result of it,they have a negative relationship with their friends and colleagues. In my opinion,I agree with the thoughts that the Internet have advantages and disadvantages on interpersonal communicate.The important thing is we learn how to use the Internet.
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