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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Two of three people, sitting on the boat, toss the rubbish out at their will while the other, pretending to see nothing, still steers the little boat into the front. Conspicuously, a lot of garbage are behind them. What the drawer intends to remind us of is not an uncommon phenomenon which has thought-provoking and profound meaning. Serious concern about how human activities lead to environmental deterioration can we infer from the picture immediately. In the several instances, the news concerning chinese tourists destroy the cultural heritage or how blameworthy behaviors Chinese produce when have a journey, stimulates our nerves and feelings. It is a shame, don't you think so, as a Chinese? However, what might account for this immoral phenomenon? There are a number of reasons but only two primary reasons deserving mention. For one thing, with the development of economy and the integration of different cultures, culture shock may make the young generation as well as the others feel puzzled about virtuous and proper education, as a result, they pollute the lake and take it as granted instead of feeling guilty about what they have done. For another thing, it is relevant to ourselves personally, such as the absence of principle, the thirsty for convenience and so on. Consequently, with the irresponsibilities, the survival environment become more and more terrible and the destroyers' personal impression will be surely damaged, meaning that they can only obtain limited achievements rather than having become more distinguished in their life. To reverse the undesirable behavior, we are supposed to appeal to the local government and specially the close supervision department make joint efforts, strengthening the laws and regulations, to prevent tourists from aggravating the deterioration of the scenery. Only in this feasible way can we have a more green, ecological and harmonious country, catering to the new development philosophy of China.
