字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
As is shown above, we can see two disabled people, supporting each other shoulder by shoulder, with their waling sticks stand lonely behind. Both of them have only one leg but run as fast as the healthy people. The implication of this picture is not only informative, but instructive as well. As a result of Reforming and Opening-up, opportunities can be found everywhere around this ancient land. At the same time, the competitions in every industry are unprecedentedly fierce. Never in any era of our nation have the stakes involving cooperation been higher than now. Take HGP(Human Genome Project) as an example, this world-famous research, budgeting 3 billion dollars, was launched by 6 countries including China, America, Japan and the like. The myth of the lone genius has disappeared, and success has more based on comprehensive collaboration. The spirit of cooperation, also called team spirit, should be an essential character for us teenagers. Accordingly, while enter the college, you can join some communities to practice your ability of cooperating with others. More importantly, you must realize that cooperation is more than a skill, it’s a consciousness which we should keep in mind. When problem occurred, this spirit can help solving it and a deep friendship can be established between you and your colleague.