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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇，但要注意减少拼写错误。
A man, lowering his hand, with his hand covering his face, sighed, "All is gone!" While the other man strides forwards the falled bottle, and happily said, "It is lucky that still remains little water." Conspicuously, what the drawer intends to remind us of is not a simple caricature which has enlightening and thought-provoking meaning. Different people have different ideas about the same situation. Just as the picture demonstrates that when the bottle falled, one person feel extremely sad because of the half lose capturing his eyes rather than the remaining, which exactly observed by the different perspective from the falled bottle, one became optimistic while the other become pessimistic. It is not an uncommon psychological behavior that many being confronted with difficulties, such as a pink slip, will lose their confidence and feel a disaster. Consequently, with the negative attitude, individuals' personal growth will surely be stunted, meaning that they can only obtain limited achievements rather than having become more distinguished in their career. Absolutely, optimists are more likely to be success in the future. As an American writer——Hellen Keller says,"Optimism is a faith that leads to a achievement" Deeply, in face of whatever happen, we should have a dialectual attitude and take advantage of the positive aspect as possible as we can. Only in this feasible way can we achieve a better self and have a more promising and virbrant country, catering to the new development philosophy of China.
