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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。
Dear friends, I, on the behalf of the Students' Union, extend the warmest welcome to all of you. Thanks for giving us a chance to exchange knowledge with you, and I believe that you will have a meaning and impressive experience during this time. To guarantee frequent and adequate to learn lessons, there are some significant suggestions, which you certainly need to implementary. On the ground of reducing the culture shock, you must have great basic English speak-skills thereby learning Chinese from films or making friends with Chinese people online may be the appropriate choice can you make. On the other hand, to overcome language barriers, it is key for you to practice Chinese again and again so as to you can follow Chinese lessons and exchange ideas with your Chinese professional teachers. I'm very sure that the above suggestions will be surely helpful if you could take them into serious account. Finally, please let me welcome you once again.
