句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
As the progress of information technology, world wide web integrates people in different regions, and the electronic products play a more and more important part in the communication and transmission of information. E-books which read through these products become popular in the young generation. Some think e-books will replace traditional books. Firstly, comparing to traditional books, e-books are cheaper. The course of making e-books is easier than traditional books, and sometimes the resources of e-books are free to download in internet. Secondly, e-books are more portable. If you want move thousands of traditional books from one place to another, a truck may be useful, but only a mobile hard disk with thoudsands of e-books. Thirdly, e-books are more available than traditional books. For example, we can download the lasted Science journal at home. Forth, e-books as opposed to traditional books will set aside nature resources. In my view, e-books will replace traditional books partly, but not completely. It should be realized that traditional books have its advantage. To begin with, one fatal shortcoming of e-books is that it need electricity. Once we cannot get enough energy, the e-books can not be read. Then, traditional books are more suitable for deep reading. The screen of electronic pruducts will make people anxious, and ignore important parts of books. But traditional books will lengthen the time of reading, make us more careful in reading and think fully.