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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3525
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,单词拼写做的很好;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

“Live and learn”is an old saying,but whether it is a truthful theory is still a question. Recently, some people who are aging enough decide to get college degrees while other same aged person are spending their lifetime on watching TV or playing cards.That leads to a discussion if one should not give up studying when they are old.Some voices say that they want to enjoy themselves because they have already been working for the whole life.The opposed agree the saying for learning could help us catch up with the rapid age and it's the best way to waste the parttime.Diversity life will enrich the olds' life which will not let them fell alone. From my perceptive,I will never give up learning.Learning which is not only include reading books but also other things like dancing,traving ect. is the way we love ourselves.

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