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文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
This is a beautiful city in the south of china.It's my hometown-Chengdu.There are many amazing things in the city such as dilicious food,Pandas and Sichuan opera. Various Food pulls people to visit Chengdu.It includes Kung Pow Chicken,hot pot,boiled fish,zhong Dumpling and so on.Visitors are addicted in these food. Of course,as the panda's home town,visitors can see 'pandas' everywhere such as the subway,the mall,the street and others.The panda is shaped like a cartoon baby so holds people's eyes easily.If you want to see active pandas,you have to go to the zoo. Lastly,if you exhausted yourself,you can go to Width alley to watch Sichuan opera.The Face Changing is very famous in the world.It's no better than watch Sichuan opera with a cup of tea. Welcome to Chengdu!
