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What i have learned from my years in my university? Just a few months later, i will graduate from university. like most students, i am bewildered about my future. but the four years in the university really teach me a lot, and when i am going to graduate from the university, i understand suddenly that the college years is a preparation for my future. as a student major in English facing graduate, i learned that fluent spoken English is very important for me. but fluent spoken English cannot be got in just a few days, it needs to exercise day by day. so it is necessary to make good use of vary source in the college to improve the spoken English, such as speech contests, presentation, and english corner. At the same time, i can conclude from my own experience that it is important for every college students to enhance your professional ability in the college years, which is also a relevant preparation for your job in the future. Only by well mastering professional abilities, can you get the favor of employers. In addition, more and more employers attach high importance to students’ practical experience in the college. It should be noted the problem that not high marks in the college express that you are suitable for a job. Practical exercises is often overlook by some high-marking students. But we should clear that practical can not only train you professional skills, but also improve your abilities in so many aspects, for example, how to address problems, how to keep good manners , and how to establish interpersonel relationships, which cannot learn from textbooks. So we should be active in taking part in social activities and use our spare time to do some part-time jobs. It is good opportunities for us to enrich ourselves. An excellent graduate should be not only fluent in professional knowledge, but also affluent in practical experiences. So as a student being graduate, i sincerely suggests the college students to put down your phones and take your first steps into society, and when you are really going to society, it is priceless treasure for you. All the above are my feelings from the bottom of my heart, and all the memories in the past years appear in my mind. This road certainly has some regrets, but i got more. I understand what is important for my life, and my college years really made some preparations for my future.