采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;高级词汇使用贫乏,注意一下个别拼写错误。
Nowadays, a mounting amount of museums is free opens, but why is free? What does your thought of this situation? Now, let us talk this problem. I think it is due to the amount is lager, and the government want to develop the sightseeing. As the society development, they believe the cuturel level is to saw the country heavy. But it is easy to make the cutruel lost, why i say this is because the piece of people isn't polite to see the old thing. And some chief is like crowded place to steal something etc. So, in my opinion, as the old saying goes,we need to make something to protect the securety of old thing. And, the safe is very important, we need to keep the safe of these place.