2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

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Nowadays, a mounting amount of museums is free opens, but why is free? What does your thought of this situation? Now, let us talk this problem. I think it is because the amount is lager, and the government want to develop the sightseeing. As the society development, they believe the cuturel level is to face the strong country . But it is easy to make the cultural lost, why i say this is because the piece of people isn't polite to see the old thing. And some chief is like crowded place to steal something etc. So, in my opinion, as the old saying goes,we need to make something to protect the securety of old thing. And, the safe is very important, we need to keep the safe of these place.