2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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A campus activity that has benefited me most There are many diverse and meaningful activities in campus. Nevertheless, pick cotton that is benefit me most. I feel content and happy in the course of that time. Firstly, I learn to persist in the face of difficulties. There is one more point, I learned the importance of solidarity and collaboration and realized the joy of helping others. Foremost, I harvest too much friendship meanwhile I more in depth understanding of my classmates. This activity have brought me an army of happiness and touching, and I will never forget those happy days when i working on the farm.