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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From these data,we can see that the college graduats earns more than high-school graduats.As the saying goes,more knowlegeble can make more money and it strengths us to make our best to do what we should do. As a matter of fact,it's reasonable phenomenon in the sociaty.For instance,Jane,the author well-known all over the world,who has no legs and
