Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。
As we can see from the picture, a couple use computer to talk with their kid, through the conversation, we know that only is the computer break can the kid comes downstairs for something to eat. It exaggerates the impact of computer on us, but we have to admit that Internet exactly change our life. In my view, the computer does simplify the way that we used to communicate, but the electronic communication can never replace face to face contact. Here are my reasons. On the one hand, the virtual communication may cause the social anxiety, that is because they never talk to people in reality, so it's hard for them to have a really friend. On the other hand, face to face communication can enhance our emotion and let's get to know each other better, which the electronic communication can't equal like that. In summary, technology can never replace the emotion that between individuals, we should do more face to face communication rather than just on the Internet.