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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9969
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题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分53.0分
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可增加文中从句的使用量;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;作者能较多样地使用词汇,高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

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Cyclocarya paliurus (Batal.) belongs to the genus Cyclocarya of Juglandaceae.It is second focused protection plant of China. With lowering blood sugar, reducing blood fat, anti-oxidation, anti-aging, improve body immunity, the study of cyclocarya paliurus is more and more in-depth, and extracted many kinds of compounds represented by triterpenoid saponin, and the hypoglycemic and hypolipidemic effects were also more and more attention.

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