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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10392
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Lots of people know that putting all eggs in one basket is unwise.If the basket falls down,all eggs would be broken.Thus the smart way is separating all eggs into different baskets to weaken the risk. Today,more and more people like risk investment.However,more chances,more risks.People can get money though buy various financial products such as P2P,lottery,share and so on.We choice different products depending on different ranks of risk.Few person spend their money on one financial product because the risk is great.Therefore they weaken the financial risk by different products. Of course,the truth also exits our life.We consult the map to find different routes in case travel jam.We prepare more plans for work project. Includes,we can't eliminate risks,but we can weaken risks to make our life better.

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