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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

Traveling is become more and more popular in China recent years. Lots of people starts plan a vacation for themselves and their family. People are going to some beautiful places which are included home and abroad, especially prefer to see some different scan around abroad. There are several reasons that creat the trend. First of all, China's has been a very fast economic growth since 1980, people's life standard get proved and people has extras money spend on something like traveling, more than just food or coth and so on. Additionally, renminbi can exchange much more dollar than before, so we can use the less money to buy the same product abroad. Finally, this reason is not about our money but about our mind which we want to see different things in our life. Traveling is good. It can expand our eyesight and make us feel life is colorful more than just working, sleeping, eating.

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