3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As is shown above, this cartoon depicts a picture that some people are surfing the Internet, divided by a huge net. However, we can also say that it is the net that connect each of them. A line beneath saying “Internet, nearer or further?”, give this picture a perfect explanation. The drawing gives a clear account of what is happening in China. Thanks to those ingenious scientist, we have stepped into the Information Age through the Electric Age. As one of the most great invention, computer absolutely influence both our work and leisure and how we communicate with others. Communications now more depend on social media such as WeChat, MicroBlog and the like. We can easy to see the scene that one typing the keyboard quickly and laughing to this cold machine. As a result, the pessimist fear one day we may lost the ability of face to face communicating. This concern is not without reason, but such risk will not necessarily materialize. Internet, as a instrument, was created to help information spread. Because of the internet, people thousands miles apart can send message mutually, and the earth becomes a so-called Global village. How we communicate can’t be the determinant, the communication opportunities created by technological development will draw our distance nearer.