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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2364
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒。

用户练习作文:

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated by the diagram above,we can observe distinctly that the statistics of accidents happening in a Chinese city reflects that the traffic conditions in the city are still worrying at current.Apparently,according to the figures which is given,in 2005,the traffic accidents in the Chinese city still failed to arouse concerns of both drivers and pedestrians. The number of accidents that resulted from drivers turning left without due care rose approximate 10 percent to 608,which is highlighted on the first row of the table.The accidents related with drivers driving under the influence of alcohol enjoyed the greatest increase,a 15% rise.In comparison,those pedestrians who cross roads carelessly also led to 401 accidents.By analyzing these causes displayed in the graph,we may reach the conclusion that both drivers and pedestrians have little respect for traffic laws. In terms of above-mentioned,countermeasures should be taken immediately so as to reverse the grim situation.First of all,relevant laws and regulations should be established to severely punish those drivers or pedestrians who violate traffic rules openly.In addition,a widespread education campaign should be launched to inform citizens of which proper rules for them are of benefit to public safety.Only in these ways can we live in a disciplined and harmonious society.

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