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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13015
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
评语:

作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

A flock of undergraduates, dressing students' uniform, with puzzle emotion emerging in their face, are confronted with a fork, which has four directions: starting a new business, going abroad for further study, taking a postgraduates' entrance exam, and receive an offer from an enterprise. The caption under this cartoon says, "Choices." Conspicuously, what the drawer intends to remind us of is not a rare situation which has been discussed for a long time. Serious concern about "what career we should choose" can we infer from the picture immediately. In the several instances, students are totally confused about where to go after leaving the campus as if the whole world far from them. What might account for this bizarre phenomenon——students don't know what they should do after school? There are two primary reasons deserving mention. The first is that most of the young spend their college time without planning, therefore, they don't equip themselves with professional knowledge or other survival skills. The other reason is more close to our educational system, to be honest, the current eaxm-oriented education doesn't accommodate our young generation. In effect, if we have a clear life goal in our minds, we will give our affirmative answer without hesitation. Work or study, is just up to you. Life never provide guarantees and warrants, and it just provide opportunities and possibilities to those who dare to take full advantage of their life to do what they really like. Only in this way, can we have a rosy life.

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