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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

There is no doubt that everything has two sides. From my point of view, it's unwise to say that snap judgements can never be trusted. For one thing, many people often make decisions from their first impression, sometimes it is right. At the same time, you must trust the snap judgements when you are in the emergency. You can not deny the fact that everything has the possibility. For another thing, snap judgements always mean that you make the decision without the deep consideration, therefore, you can not trust the snap judgements, which will make you have a heavy loses. For instance, as a businessman, if you want to invest something, you must make a market research rather than do whatever you want, because a judgement which made after the deep consideration can help you avoid risk.

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