2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中词汇丰富度不足，拼写检查也要重视；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

My views on Online Shopping Nowadays, more and more people like to buy something on online. And it is popular with people. As a student, I always go shopping on online. Someone think it is good for our life. Online shopping has been a fashion. It is very concience. It can save our time.If we go shopping in the supermarket, we would waste our time. we could do anything in this time. But someone think it is bad for our life. Online shopping will be make us lazy. And it will be influce some store. If we buy a good, we would wait long time. In my opinion, I think online shopping very good. Because it can improve our effict. I hope it can improve product quality and have a good honnst.