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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11299
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. Apparently, the picture reflects that the overusing of mobile phone, it even effects the people's normal life. Many reasons contributed to these changes. In my view, the consequences are more severe than we think. On the one hand, with the development of technology, mobile phones have become a part of our life. When people go out, they would forget to bing the wallet rather than forget to bring the phone. So that may cause that we pay more attention to phone, instead of our work or study. On the other hand, a lot people are absorbed in the internet things, like the interesting news, or their friends circle's update and so on. So people may be addicted to the fictitious world, and ignore the things that happened in the real world. In summary, the overusing of phones' disadvantages overweigh the advantages. We should restrain the overusing of phones appropriately, but if we continue to ignore the issue, more problem will crop up.

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