2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者能较多样的使用词汇表达，但要注意词汇拼写的检查。

Communicate is talk with somebody ,this action can bring many benfical things for us, for example , can help us study more knowledge ,and help us know the peoples idea who talk with us. whem i am young, yeah,maybe i am sixteen years old,i like a girl,she is very beautiful,and she always smile,like a star in the night sky, at the beginning,i have little shy,and i dare not speak with her,i am afraid she dont like me ,and indisposition talk, so i am very distressed, one day, i take heart of grace,and talk with her,i know she love me,like i love her,and i know she custom,what movies she like,and what music she always listening,pass through the communicate ,i know her,and she know me. You see,if i dont communicate with the girl,maybei cant find my loves,so,communicte is very imporatant.