2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者用词生动多样，请继续努力，希望能更灵活地使用高级词汇。

Communicate is talk with somebody , this action can bring many benefit things for us, for example , can help us gain more knowledge , and help us know the people idea who communicate with us. Whem i am young, yeah, maybe i am sixteen year old, i like a girl, she is very beautiful, and always smiling , like a star in the night sky, at the beginning, i have little shy, and i dare not speak with her, i am afraid she don't like me , and indisposition talk, so i am very distressed, one day, i take heart of grace, and talk with her, i know she love me, like i love her, and i know she custom,what movies she like, and what music she always listening, pass through the communicate , i know her, and she know me. You see, if i don't communicate with the girl, maybei can't find my loves, so, that's why communicate is very imporatant.