2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇表达较丰富多样，高级词汇使用较熟练；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

nowadays,the phenomenon appear about goods on excessive packaging.The reason about this is costumer away attracted by beautiful products.As far as i'm concerned,goods on excessive packaging is not good at environment.It not only waste material but also cause pollution.There are two advice i think can change the situation. First,custumers　should change　their　thought　about　products，second，corporation　should　know　a good　product not　rely　on　appearance．I hope everyone can buy good products.