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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Absolutely,everyone has the heart of love of beauty,especially in this society in which judges a person by their appearance.What exactly leads to this phenomenon and what is the disadvantageous by doing this? There are several reasons attributed to this phenomenon,just as followings:women want to present the best moment in front of the men.When looking for a job,a subtle make up may satisfy the employees which will give you more chances.Definitely,making up not only the way you love yourselves but also respect to others.But someone judge a man or woman's abillity only depend on the appearance in spite of knowing nothing. In my perspective,appearance is not relevant to whether a person is suitable for the job.It may be conducive to gain more scores to us but not the most crucial factor.Rich our brains are the only way to go further.

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