文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;结构良好,但是语言不流畅;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
I live in a small town which is surround by beautiful lakes and woods. There is a big lake in north of the town. It is a famous beauty spot. On weekend and holiday, some people from city visit this lake. They can swim through the lake, or take a walk through the woods. They can eat fresh fish and shrimp on the lake, or camp out beside the woods. Litter baskets are placed beside roads, but the grand always is covered with kinds of rubbish when every holiday is over. For example piece of papers, plastic bags, empty bottles, rusty tins. We hope every body to keep our town tidy and clean.