小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend he comes hebei he is short and fat he like dancing but not good at it ,everymoring he go to hill behind his house dancing ,he have a nice colse which his father bought him fronm guangzhou my friend like wanter and he go to swuming every week