小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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My holiday Today I want to say something about my holiday.It's the statutory holiday-Spring festival.I bought the train ticket 14 days before its depart time. Some times I bought sleeper ticket,some times I unfortunately bought a seat ticket. I took train to back to my parents's house. I stayed with them for about seven to ten days. We cleaned the house and prepared the oblations for our forefather. At the fist day of the lunar year, we went out to the graves of our forbears. We worshiped them and presented the oblations at the front of their graves, then we exploded firecrackers to call them here to enjoy the oblations. The next days, we went for relatives to say "Happy New Year" to the seniors. In the ninth or tenth day of my holiday, I started my return trip to the "Hell City"!